the school assignment

Post by **Ashankan-sensei** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 1:19 pm

yes here it is...

this is my first time making a comic.
the quality of the drawings are poor, but i only used about 12-16 hours in a row finishing them.

please post your comments.

Post by **Buzkashi** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 6:22 pm

Not bad...

Post by **Ashankan-sensei** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 11:32 pm

thank you.
well then you should check out the comments i have got in dp.

Post by **Eldo** » Mon Mar 14, 2005 8:37 am

....

This is a school assignment? You're not planning on getting a high mark for it are you?

Post by **Ashankan-sensei** » Mon Mar 14, 2005 8:14 pm

well i didn't get to bad grades on it.

but i made it cause of the humor, not for its good quality

but it doesn't like as bad as the scans in reality.

Post by **Arresty** » Mon Mar 14, 2005 9:29 pm

What grade are you, and what class is it for?

Post by **Ashankan-sensei** » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:41 pm

i think you would call it high school 2nd grade, arts and crafts.
or something like that.
i'm not shure.

Post by **Eldo** » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:52 pm

hmm...I just didn't like the content of it

...didn't know you could get away with that at your school.

The art wasn't half bad. I liked the first three pages.

Post by **Arresty** » Tue Mar 15, 2005 2:12 am

Yeah I was asking cause of the content myself. I wouldn't turn something potentially offensive to a teacher, but I also couldn't' draw that much anyways.

Post by **Starnum** » Tue Mar 15, 2005 7:38 am

Wow, you want to resize those pics so scrolling to the right is necessary. Either that or post them as links. Please take care of this, or I’ll do it for you. Once this has been done, I’ll give you my opinion, as I haven't actually read it yet.

Post by **Ashankan-sensei** » Wed Mar 16, 2005 2:36 pm

yes sir!
right away!

Post by **Starnum** » Thu Mar 17, 2005 6:53 am

Thank you sir.

By the way, in my opinion, that sucked hard core! *shrugs*

Post by **Eldo** » Thu Mar 17, 2005 6:59 am

Starnum wrote:that sucked hard core! *shrugs*

Raw honesty. Ouch, the truth hurts.

Post by **Arresty** » Thu Mar 17, 2005 7:00 am

I was trying to be nice and just not mention my opinion. But Starnum got it pretty much on the head.

Post by **Femto** » Thu Mar 17, 2005 7:02 am

My grandmother always used to say, "If you don't have anything nice to say about somebody, don't say anything at all."

That's what I've been doing...

Post by **Eldo** » Thu Mar 17, 2005 7:02 am

Arresty wrote:I was trying to be nice and just not mention my opinion. But Starnum got it pretty much on the head.

Yeah, I was trying to be nice and gave a false opinion. Since I'm such a nice person, I don't tell them it's shit in their face, but rather behind their backs

. But he did mention something about posting his school assignment two months ago in a very old now defunct thread.

Post by **Starnum** » Thu Mar 17, 2005 11:46 am

Femto wrote:My grandmother always used to say, "If you don't have anything nice to say about somebody, don't say anything at all."

That's what I've been doing...

Well, he asked for my opinion. It's nothing personal of course. *Shrugs*

Post by **Eldo** » Thu Mar 17, 2005 11:55 am

My grandparents lacked a proper education and discipline, so unfortunately they are uneducated oafs that cannot speak for themselves.

So about 90% of the things that came out of their mouths should not be taken for granted.

This thread would have died out eventually if someone didn't break the ice and painfully provide an honest answer. I disapproved the content of the assignment and the drawings weren't exactly Monet or Picasso. But in an attempt to be 'nice' and provide some encouragement, I gave only a one-ended opinion. I did 'like' the first three pages. It did evoke a laugh response from within me. That was sufficient enough for a 'compliment'.

Post by **Ashankan-sensei** » Thu Mar 17, 2005 3:28 pm

i didnt make it for its autenthic(or what its called) quality.

my only intention was to make someone laugh of my parody.
if you by any chance laughed while you read it, my goal has been fullfiled.

i know it sucks, but that is some off the point...

hopefully you will think better off my next drawings...

all i can say is that i'm a beginner.

Post by **Starnum** » Fri Mar 18, 2005 10:11 am

Hey, no problem with that. I understand that it was supposed to be kind of sucky now. Don't let me discourage you. I look forward to your next work. Try to make this one good; I want to see what you're actually capable of.

Post by **Eldo** » Fri Mar 18, 2005 10:46 pm

Ashankan-sensei wrote:my only intention was to make someone laugh of my parody.
if you by any chance laughed while you read it, my goal has been fullfiled.

i know it sucks, but that is some off the point...

I don't know dude...your intention is not supposed to make us laugh or impress us, but to obtain the highest mark possible from your teacher at school. Unless, your education isn't valued too highly yet for your grade (for us, it only counts for the last two years of high school) or you're just dicking around so far. I know for a fact if I submitted this kind of material to my art teacher, I surely would have flunked art, no questions to why.

But if you have some spare time and you would like to do something like that again, I'll be happy to read it.

Post by **DidUrHusband** » Wed Mar 30, 2005 1:21 pm

...

Is that....is that a penis?

Post by **Starnum** » Thu Mar 31, 2005 5:09 am

Unfortunately.