Hi guys I'm doing a read along series for those interested:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wiYgHv6Zoy8
Let's Read Berserk- The Snake Baron
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Re: Let's Read Berserk- The Snake Baron
I'll give you some points for having the courage and patience to do this, but you have absolutely no voice acting capabilities. To some extent I understand that a single person can't give unique voices to that many characters (more than none would help though), but at least try to act their respective dialogue (e.g. if someone is scared, act scared). Second, the editing is weird, you flash through certain connecting scenes and the action is just off. And lastly, I'm not digging the jokes, it's one or the other: Go for nothing but jokes, or make it straight, but both doesn't fit.
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Re: Let's Read Berserk- The Snake Baron
You lost me at "let's turn off our black pornography"
Trust me, I'm a doctor!
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Re: Let's Read Berserk- The Snake Baron
"blacked"- there's a difference. But anyways thanks for the tips.dialdfordesi wrote:You lost me at "let's turn off our black pornography"
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Re: Let's Read Berserk- The Snake Baron
So I switched over to doing analysis. Maybe you'll like this better:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Umkoa69OlU
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Umkoa69OlU
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Re: Let's Read Berserk- The Snake Baron
Hey Sassy or DankKnight or whoever you are don't quit your day job 
Although you did have some funny stuff in the anal-ysis.... The reading thing was a little fast but interesting anal-ysis was better but not by much you got me to laugh twice... I will keep watching but not exactly something I would watch
Going back to Blacked.com now

Although you did have some funny stuff in the anal-ysis.... The reading thing was a little fast but interesting anal-ysis was better but not by much you got me to laugh twice... I will keep watching but not exactly something I would watch
Going back to Blacked.com now


Thank you sir, may I have another

